Kings Speech feedback #2

[Hunter]

how do i improve my speeches? where am i going wrong? what topics do i need to cover? any ideas?

PS: does anyone else want to collab with me? @blackoutwhitein did and we racked in a lot of views and comments.

 

[Insomniac]

Change it to the queens speech, we want this to be a gender inclusive space.

 

[Hunter]

Change it to the queens speech, we want this to be a gender inclusive space.

you can make that if you want